Outline

Hook: Any situation in which you are forced to fight in is a bad one

Thesis: Given that the main character isn't allowed to fight if he is getting bullied or has to lie to the people he loves just to stay a live makes this book unfair.

Body paragraph #1

Topic sentence: Throughout the Book John constantly gets bullied but can't do anything about it.

Evidence: A classmate of his always instigating fights between John and himself.

Evidence: Mark puts a pile of manure in Johns locker.

Body paragraph #2

Topic sentence: John often has to lie about his identity which hurts him deeply every time he does it.

Evidence: Every time he has to move he is forced to leave the friends he tried so hard to befriend.

Evidence: Beginning of book when he said he had to change to another one of his lives.